Just a heads up, I think there is a bug in the code. If you choose the long haired Palmier plus she/her pronouns and go to church you still get called "the Palmier boy" (or something like that, can't recall the exact phrase) by one of the background extras.
When looking for the cat Lyall says "mam", should be "ma'am".
In our first encounter with Thane, Quill says: "Thane! How are you my friend?" should be "How are you, my friend?"
Anyway, love your art and if you are looking for beta testers/editors I'd like to help :) There is more stuff to edit, but I don't want to make a giant post.