The writing is fairly error-free for the most part, but I'm very confused about the use of the word "spats"... from context, it sounds like it's being used to refer to Freya's shorts, and in an early scene, also a towel? After checking a couple of dictionaries, the only clothing-related meaning of that word I can find is a type of shoe accessory from the 1910s–20s, nothing to do with shorts or towels.