There are things that I like and things I don't like here. I go into a lot of detailed criticism throughout the video so I'll just summarize here. I know it's a demo so I tried to treat it as such. There's a lot of things I would like to see if this were to turn into a full game, one thing simply being more stuff to do. One of my criticism's word for word was
"I don't think there's enough mechanics here to be fun, and there's not enough tension for it to be scary."
But overall I can really see the potential for what this game COULD be with plenty of time and care put into it. I even have a few suggestions on what I'd like to see as well!
I hope this is obvious but please don't take any criticisms personally, it simply comes from a place of wanting to see the game turn out better!
One random thing I'd like to see you and many other people do is make your Itchio thumbnail more enticing! The preview picture is very boring and doesn't make people want to check out your game. I know it's lame but sometimes you gotta show off that clickbait monster right from the get go lol.