Thank you so much, many critiques and nice suggestions come to me include the one from you. So in my plan for next update basically I already made many changes of it, like shorten the dialogue, add skip on prologue, turn off that battle camera movement ,etc (Actually also a bit dizzy when try it myself ~lol)...
But yeah regarding the english, because I'm not native english speaker, I still have some problem with it ^^' And sadly because my project is free I don't have a budget to hire helper T^T (That's why, now I'm focusing on freelance jobs and decide to pending the update, but as a result I got sick and the update pending longer haha...)