Seen a few bugs with the English translation as things were blanked out.
The name input also needs tweaked so the translation picks it up.
$ Player = renpy.input(_("Escribe tu nombre"))
https://mega.nz/file/WXwCBToR#GC0W33DCaQH4OOwjdAauDv7eruSr5PPAWdAV0YQaUTc
You can review what I changed with https://winmerge.org