Of course!! Personally I think your art is super stunning and I love how you draw the characters' gentle small smiles and smug grins :D I think Sei looks especially cute in the scene where he smiles at Shizu after she catches him reading a book (and you already know how I feel about Liam's smile haha)
Also this is a bit unrelated but I think it's really nice that Shizu is older than both Sei and Liam haha - even though ages aren't directly mentioned in the story (other than setting Sei/Shizu's dynamic). It wish more otome games have older heroines!
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I'm looking forward a lot to the future drama! I can't wait to see where the rug pulls goes too! I'd be super cool if Shizu and Sei become escapees/fugitives and we ended up seeing more of the world, rather than the story being centered around living in and pleasing the noble court which was what I was originally expecting from the demo's beginning.
Thank you for taking the time to read my feedback :D I shall add your twitter to the list of ones I check regularly for updates >w<