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Anonymous Organism1 year ago (4 edits) (+1)

When you think of what you'd like the updated dream images to be in comparison to the current ones, do any particular details come to mind?

Ok, thank you!

Understandable! My guess was that when children were present, little goodies may have been occasionally hidden for them. Since the village had been lacking children for years and Colby treats the village like family, I thought he might view the player as a newly adopted child of sorts. Perhaps Colby wanted Michael to experience what everyone else did when they were young.

That'd make sense.

You're welcome!

Edit: Does this seem like a good time to mention any noticeable spelling or grammatical errors? I've seen a few before, but wanted to focus on the more important things first.

As for the credits, I forgot to mention that my name is Emily Wise.

Also, which dog breed or mix is Huxley?

JakeGosche1 year ago(+1)

"When you think of what you'd like the updated dream images to be in comparison to the current ones, do any particular details come to mind?"

I'd probably want to keep a more pixelated style but more detailed than the sprites that I'm using, similar to the character portraits that are in the game. I'll likely add an effect that shifts the image around to give a hazy "dream-like" effect.

"Understandable! My guess was that when children were present, little goodies may have been occasionally hidden for them. Since the village had been lacking children for years and Colby treats the village like family, I thought he might view the player as a newly adopted child of sorts. Perhaps Colby wanted Michael to experience what everyone else did when they were young."

Oh wow, I really like that! I think it adds a lot of much needed characterization for Colby. Would you mind if I used that?

"Edit: Does this seem like a good time to mention any noticeable spelling or grammatical errors? I've seen a few before, but wanted to focus on the more important things first."

Absolutely! If you've noticed any spelling/grammar errors, I'd be interested to see them.

"As for the credits, I forgot to mention that my name is Emily Wise."

Noted! Thanks, Emily!

"Also, which dog breed or mix is Huxley?"

I imagined him as a beagle mix. I grew up with a beagle so I'm biased. :P

Anonymous Organism1 year ago (11 edits) (+1)

Ok!

Not at all, go ahead!

Ok, I'll start double-checking their locations!

You're welcome!

Understandable! Which type of beagle mix do you think he is?

Edit: In the book about Ashanna, Haystack Village is referred to as Harvestville. Is Haystack Village a smaller location within Harvestville or was the latter an old name for the area?

It also says, "Ashanna has watched over the town and it's inhabitants". I think "it's" should be replaced with "its".

What is the official spelling of Kiera/Keira's name? I'll just list every mention of her possible names: Her name label says "Kiera". When she introduces herself, her name is shown as "keira". When Parker says that people tend to be surprised about their relationship, he calls her "Keira". During the breakup cutscene, Orwin says "Keira".

During Fred's introduction cutscene, "probably" was misspelled as "probalby".

During some of Kiera/Keira's bar dialogue, she says, "My husband Parker good guy" instead of "My husband Parker is a good guy".

When Elizabeth smiles and asks you to visit Rusty, she says, "see if you can't cheer him up". Was that a typo?

When Parker says that he's an inventor, "successful" is misspelled as "succesful".

JakeGosche1 year ago(+1)

"Understandable! Which type of beagle mix do you think he is?"

To be honest I haven't given it too much thought! I like leaving it a bit ambiguous, I've had rescue dogs where you could see a primary breed but then there's a mix of a few different other breeds that are too hard to pin down. So in honor of them, I'll leave it ambiguous (for now).

And thank you for the grammar/spelling corrections! Those are incredibly helpful. Keira is the correct spelling, so that's a pretty major issue considering that's her name label! Good catch.

Anonymous Organism1 year ago (4 edits) (+1)

Understandable, I also like rescue dogs! I just asked because I might try drawing Huxley and wanted to look up reference pictures of his real life counterparts. It's not an issue, I'll find something convincing!

Speaking of art, I've been working on some potential Marion dream drawings/fan art and I'll let you know when they're done!

You're welcome, I'll add more as they're encountered!

Edit:

Out of curiosity, do Ron and Pamela keep a futon in their drawers or behind their counter during the day? If not, is there a bed in an inaccessible room?

After Millie tells you how to break the boulder and your objective is updated, other NPCs will still discuss the boulder question.

When Colby responds to the boulder question, he says, "I'd help you break that boulder but my muscles aren't quite what they're used to.". I'd recommend changing it to something like, "I'd help you break that boulder, but my muscles aren't quite what they used to be."

JakeGosche1 year ago(+1)

Hey Emily! I thought I had replied to you earlier but just realized I missed it. Not to mention it looks like I missed one of your questions from your previous comment. Shame on me!

"Edit: In the book about Ashanna, Haystack Village is referred to as Harvestville. Is Haystack Village a smaller location within Harvestville or was the latter an old name for the area?"

Oh wow, that needs to be updated. Harvestville was the placeholder town name I used for a while. For a while the game's title was "Harvest Festival" but I decided to change it because of the title similarities with Harvest Moon.

"Understandable, I also like rescue dogs! I just asked because I might try drawing Huxley and wanted to look up reference pictures of his real life counterparts. It's not an issue, I'll find something convincing!"

Oh, gotcha! If you're looking for a point of reference, I would say a beagle-lab mix is the closest to what I had in mind for Huxley. Something like this. But since he's just pixel art for now, don't feel like you have to be confined to that.

"Speaking of art, I've been working on some potential Marion dream drawings/fan art and I'll let you know when they're done!"

That'd be amazing, I'm looking forward to seeing your fan art!

"Out of curiosity, do Ron and Pamela keep a futon in their drawers or behind their counter during the day? If not, is there a bed in an inaccessible room?"

So, I imagined the door to their room being on the side of the wall (and inaccessible) but in future references I'd like to make each house more personalized.

"After Millie tells you how to break the boulder and your objective is updated, other NPCs will still discuss the boulder question."

Ah, you're right! I'll update that.

"When Colby responds to the boulder question, he says, "I'd help you break that boulder but my muscles aren't quite what they're used to.". I'd recommend changing it to something like, "I'd help you break that boulder, but my muscles aren't quite what they used to be"

Good catch, thank you! As always, it's a huge help and I'm very grateful for your insights. :)

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