Wow, that was HOT! :D I love the artwork, it's absolutely gorgeous, the sound and voice acting just adds to it! Few things that I would love to see improved, besides of the build thingy (I played the fixed one only :) ):
- The intro is great, I would love to see it in text as well, as it's hard to focus on the plot with the voice-acting only!
- I kept on biting him too early as he was wonderfully spreading up and I thought it's going to work, had no idea I actually had to wait until the very end :) Maybe that's just my issue, but I didn't quite get this mechanic!
Overall, super polished, beautiful, I ship the boyes. :D