What did you think of Bee as a narrator?
I recognize her as what literature teachers call an "unreliable narrator" because of her internalized homophobia. It does not make me dislike her, though.
What was your favorite ending?
FanFiction.Net. Probably because I'm a bit of a writer myself and related to the "find someone who understands me through my writing" part.
Any other questions/feedback?
The art caught my attention while I was doing my "scour Itch for the latest VNs" session.
I also liked the glossary bit, since I decided to collect VNs that offer deliberate cultural glimpses. It's nice to find one from my own country.
The writing is also pretty good. It feels more deliberate than other VN scripts.
It was a little hard to get into the anime bits, though. Maybe write less in "complete" sentences in order to convey Bee's emotions? I find her reactions to the anime more important to the story and easily more engaging compared to her narration of the anime.
I appreciate your treatment of Bee's sexuality in the context of a conservative culture. Sensitive but from the perspective of someone who's affected by the culture herself.
I consider this game to have a good replay value. A number of the endings have to do with being "out". While repetitive, they're far from redundant. They emphasize a point and I think players like me could see the point clearly: The concern of getting "outted" without your consent is recurrent. They're everyday situations with high stakes.