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Thank you for the free release once again! Not done with the update, but here are two typos I’ve spotted:

- Missing word: "That would me, Luna’s boy-friend." (missing "be" after "would")
- Typo: My moves are irresistable" (should be "irresistible")

Kudos to the writers and editors who keep doing justice to the storytelling :)

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Thank you for the typos!

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A couple more:

- I think after Nancy says "Ready as I’ll ever be" in the elevator, it’s probably Orion that is supposed to respond "Then let’s go!", but it’s tagged as coming from her.
- Missing word: "I’m gonna fuck the shit of you" (missing "out" before "of you")

And that ending... I was hoping there would be something like that and they wouldn’t leave empty-handed, and once again you did not disappoint :D
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You have a really nice eye to catch typos. I already fixed both

And thank you very much!