You got a nice story and a cool concept, i liked it! Even if the platforming part could be bigger and challenger, it was fun About the story part, the character was really slow, idk if it's intentional
That the story part was slow was more due to webgl making it slow cause in my editor it was normal speed. Also the platforing was more impossible the first time i tested so i had to make it easier to help people reach the end xd.