Hey thanks!
Regarding the art, I’d probably make the dialog borders a bit tighter and thinner, they dominate the space. And the background isn’t supposed to be white with purple, but all one color. Plus I want to add a script to the dialog scene so I can just instantiate one and go.
The rest of the art would be more pixels, shading, subtle color variations, maybe a layer of dripping slime - you know - the usual stuff.
And finally the arms movement isn’t fully realized. It’s just what the physics does and it’s barely acceptable. Like he is supposed to flailing about when falling, but never got that far.