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Love the redesign of the background. You are doing an amazing job 10/10.

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Thank u!

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Hey, I know you're busy with both life and making this game, but here is a comment I made over a month ago about you doing a fantastic job and offering some improvements I did.


Hey Marius, I just want to say thank you for making Sky Division.

It may be a porn game on the surface, but underneath there is a heartfelt story that is surprisingly grounded in some subtexts and I for one figures that's one of the reasons why it's so appealing.

While it's true the art is basic in quality, it does not detract from the game at all, but I, like your followers, still want you to improve your skills so you can create visually better games with your unique style.

Hence why I've extracted the files of Sky Division and did some corrections and improvements to both the English script and image files along with some tips and ideas for you to use for Sky Division. I can send you the Google Drive link if you want.

If you do decide to use them, don't give me credit. All I'm doing is just helping someone with a good story.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1a816Z9spdNMT813kFuiwkAQOgDREPEzx/view?usp=shari...

wow.. i just can say.. wow. Gary, please, contact me on twitter. i'm interested in your ideas, i've been looking at the folder of ideas and tips. it all looks very interesting. Almost all of your ideas go in the same direction as my original idea.

I am looking at correcting the english translation. would you be interested in correcting the english version of the game?

and thank you for the work you did, I want to reward you and work on future updates of the game.

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I was doing that, look at the translated scripts with Notepad++ and no need to reward me, I'm just helping out someone with potential get their feet wet in game making and story writing.