That was admittedly the one part of the song I didn't quite like the end result, couldn't get it to sound nice no matter what instruments I tried lmao.
As far as the music theory part goes though, I honestly don't know much about it so I can't really say for sure about the progression xD.
But I did mess around with it a lot trying to get it to sound right, so you're probably on point there. It's likely the reason I couldn't get it to sound right, so thanks for the insight!