Super solid idea. I think like a previous commenter mentioned, this would totally fit as a metallica-esque piece imo.
What you've done here is great, the quality of the recordings are top notch, and it sounds very well mixed. If I had to provide one point of criticism, it's that it feels like it's building towards something that only partially gets started. What i mean is, near the beginning there are a couple times where you have some drum fills, and my body was expecting to move into a more intense part, if that makes sense.
Great work on the solo as well.
Great entry!