Thanks, not mean to sound mean, anyway.
Thought today quite similar how IF and giallo films uses space and items, and found your IF story
No problem! The game it's just a demo, though. Let me know what you think about it anyway. It's my first if ever, so every comment is appreciated.
The only concern I have about grey-ish words, I suppose it will confuse general public and clearly technical UX problem. I think 70-ishness is on purpose.