I'm going to add this. I bought all your Femboy interactive stories and will look over them, one package each week.
Words are very important especially spoken. This may seem childish to a programmer but to someone who is reading this in these RENPY games, I believe it adds to the story.
I'll mention a few spoken sentences by the protagonist that I think would definitely add to your Femboy story selections - especially since seeing them initially as shy and bashful to begin with, which does match the personality of a Femboy.
Yet when things get heated up, it is then they take charge of the situation and become hot and demanding and possibly a bit of a bully.
. . .
They REVEAL they are not a girl after all:
"What were you expecting ?"
"Do you like what you see ?"
"I can see you want this."
"No disappointment there. {Grin}"
"Yes. It wants you and I want you."
"You knew this would happen."
"You knew it would come down to this."
"You see what happens when you trust me."
"I think we were both expecting the same thing."
"It's all for you, baby."
"Come over here and give it a kiss."
"I'll tell you where we go from here."
"You want this and I want you to want it."
"Put your hand on it."
"This is going to be fun."
"That look on your face. Is that desire I see ?"
. . .
DIRECTIONS and add heat to story:
"Follow me to the bedroom."
"Follow me to the bathroom."
"No-one can hear us now."
"You have what I want."
"I have what you want."
"Get on your knees, now."
"Kneel in front of the toilet."
"Lie down on the bed."
"Close your eyes."
"Let me get the lights."
"Pucker your lips."
"We have all night to enjoy this."
"Now isn't this better ?"
"You make a great seat cushion."
"I can see you're interested."
"Hold my underwear/panties."
"This will be a sleepover you'll never forget."
"Just you and me for the weekend."
"Just you and me for all of next week."
. . .
LOCATION and domination:
"Obviously you know where you belong."
"You belong in here/there."
"Get in there, now."
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REBUTTAL:
"I can't hear your denials over your raging hard-on."
"I don't care if you are straight. Tonight, you're mine."
"Call your G/F and tell her you can't come tonight."
"Tell your parents you're sleeping over at a friend's."
"Your parents are gone for the weekend. You're mine now."
"My parents are gone for the weekend. You're mine now."
"It's difficult to believe you're straight when you're as hard as I am."
"Shh ... shhh ... let me take care of everything."
"Hey. I know you really want this - and I'm gonna give it to you."
"The door is locked. We won't be disturbed."
"You won't be a virgin after tonight."
"Fuck marriage. I just want to taste your wedding cake."
. . .
DIRECT heat:
"Lick my balls."
"Get your tongue up inside me."
"Eat my ass."
"Kiss it."
"Kiss my ass."
"Kiss my butthole."
"Suck it."
"Suck my dick."
"Suck my cock."
"Kiss my feet."
"Lick my toes."
"Drink it down."
"Yeah, ride that cock."
"Yeah, ride my ass."
"Ffffuuuck that's good !"
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This part is purely optional to consider adding to dialogue:
To add, bullies always play a special part in stories like these. While they can be commanding there are a few methods we see in stories about bullies normally focused around public school.
1. Toilet Swirly
2. Wedgie
3. Stuff in trash
4. Spanking
5. Feminization (force to wear female clothes)
6. Anything from direct heat above but done publicly where others can see it.
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Toilet Swirly is pretty unique. In this the protagonist grabs the victim and shoves their head in a toilet, usually at school, clean or not, and then uses a unique vocabulary comprised of:
"Get in there and stay in there."
"Drink up."
"You make a good toilet brush."
"Clean that bowl with your face."
"I'm going to flush you down."
"You know you belong in there."
"Suck my dick while you're at it."
"The only thing you'll kiss will be the bottom of this toilet."
"Did I say you could pull your head out ?"
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Feminization, turning a guy into a girl, often by more than one bully, can have such sentences as:
"OMG you look so cute in that !"
"You are so adorbs right now."
"Now you are one sexy looking girl !"
"You see. I was right. You make a much better girl than a boy."
"All this time and you were a femboy yourself and didn't know it."
"Go look at yourself in the mirror. You look better now, don't you."
"You could be my little sister."
"You could be my little niece."
"You could be my big sister."
"You could be my big niece."
"I'm going to dress you like this every day."
. . .
Some synonyms for the victim the bully can use are pretty far-reaching:
Faggot, Loser, Pansy, Pussy, Idiot, Moron, Dumbass, Cocksucker, Gayboy. There are many others.
. . .
Overall text is a pretty easy thing to add so please consider such options for future development of your games - or if you'd like more ideas, I have several.
As for myself, I write books, and sometimes those chapters get pretty steamy, so I definitely can get into reading and enjoying your work here, @owlyboi.