OK, just read your story and, mmm, well, I don't want to be too harsh, but, no. I love the concept, and I love Yuri Visual Novels, (in fact, they are 98% the only ones I read,) but it went through at the speed of a Lamborghini doing 0 to 60mph. The story never really got started, then it was over. I appreciate it was a free game, but, sorry, there are far better ones for me than this. I really did try and enjoy it, but, sorry, no. But, hey, what do I know? Maybe I am missing something, but at 15 minutes, it's just way too short. Thank you anyway.
hey, i'm the writer! I've written a couple of longer things if you're interested: https://punishedhag.itch.io/