This is more of a sketch than an actual game, so I gave it low ratings overall. There is some irony, a few random events and dice rolls, and that is it.
However, the initial concept of a DM mastering the adventure of another DM made me smile. It's nice in a "meta" kind of way. Maybe there is an idea for a game in here, and I'd love to see the result if you decide to build that game!