Good review, it's actually quite hard for most of us to criticize some ones work and I feel this is lacking on itch.io. Constructive criticism is the only way you can help improve some ones work.
I haven't played this game yet but I will. I can relate to your comments in general about the overuse of jump scares in indie horror. I can also relate to the lack of story and logic in lots of indie games. However, as said, I will give this game a go it sounds pretty good from the devs comments (except the loud jump scares lol)