The writing on this was pretty good. The pov half-shift before the crash was a little confusing? But otherwise I could follow everything, and your sentence construction itself is solid. The silly acronyms seem divisive among the comments- it's definitely evocative of a certain sense of humor to imagine those lines being said with the same straight-faced tone as everything else. (Definitely a hit to the Stealth score, though.)
The characters were super cute, I loved the protagonists' designs. Sol's story was very sweet. The strawberry backgrounds were a little perplexing? But they're jam-appropriate and very pretty so