Agreed with aeta that the writing needs polish on a construction level. Text is everything in a VN, you gotta give the right impression. I don't need any hands to count how many apostrophes are in this script, which is not a good thing.
I like the gameplay, it's giving Ace Attorney with the way the different actions are setup. There wasn't much impetus to progress other than the satisfaction of having seen everything, so my energy to look around kinda petered out after a bit? But I think I still saw a bunch of it
The character designs are super cute. It's not often you see pixel art this big, so you can really appreciate all the little details of the sprites.