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I love the game. There are some aspects I could largely do without, but the plethora of choices take care of a lot of that. My biggest complaint is the constant build up in sexual tension between MC and his "Queen", yet still nothing, and there are long periods of time where there is no interaction between them. With how this story is, she should be his MAIN focus, and everyone else slightly less important. I know it's an AVN, and it's your story, in which you are doing a phenomenal job, I just feel that it's been far too much teasing when it comes to the story between these two. My only other issue is that I think there are just too many love interests, and some of them just don't get the focus they should. I know that we have the option to not choose some of them, but it still feels like there are just too many, and it's kind of taking a bit away from the larger story. Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on this at all, this is all just my opinion, and I WILL continue to come back to this for each update. You are doing great overall. I just hope you take this as some constructive criticism, and not me bashing your story/work in any way. Ultimately it's your work and it is appreciated. I look forward to future updates! <3