No, he/she is right. The person needs more practicing-
unwanted criticism isnt ok though if they didnt ask for it they shouldnt give it
Im agreeing with Vera here. They like it, so they dont need your criticism. Plus, they never asked for it.
I didn't mean to critisise I was just helping them so people wouldn't critisise them in the future which is why I put no offence. Sorry if it was misunderstood แตฬ