I hope you're doing well today! Thank you so much for the wonderful update! The typos I found for chapter 3 so far:
- Page starts with "Lawrence makes a tired noise when he comes home." Later on, there's a period missing in the "You giggle" line. I found the same mistake a bit later on, in the "You giggle You'd love to. Would he have time for it?" line.
- Page starts with "You can't do anything. Stop. Walk away." after you choose to help the old man. In the line "The protection fee is useless, desparate instead of desperate.
- Not sure if it's a typo or intentional, but writing it down here just in case. "The streets are empty outside your apartment." page, when meeting Wingding. When the mc looks up at him, the option you chose to represent when you're feeling danger repeats twice. In my case, it looks like
"You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.
You slowly raise your gaze up.
You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.".
That would be all! Again, thank you so much for the update! <3
Hi!! Doing well so far. Hope your week has been treating you kindly!
-Found & fixed - will be included in the next update.
- Same as above
- Yeah, it seemed like a good idea when writing, but after having read it a few more times it feels unnecessarily repetitive. Second line will be deleted.
I so very very appreciate you doing this! Much love! 🥰❤️