looks good. I like the clear setting and premise of the game, as it certainly avoids people not knowing what they should be doing. I’ve only been able to skim the rules so i can’t tell if there are any gotchas, but it looks a reasonable adaptation of Cairn. I’ll probably be using it with my slight hack of Into the Odd, but I’ll try it out RAW first.
Question about formatting: you have odd [] and [][] ‘bars’ appearing in odd places - are they intended and I’m just not getting their usage? Also the Adventure Creation Guidelines looks like it was meant to be a table, but if so the formatting has been lost.