It's really good. I did notice some spelling mistakes but its not bad were it will take people out of the story just one of them will, it on the closet part trying to get out of the bedroom I think. slide off your bed is spelled wrong. sorry I forgot how to take a screen shot with my computer so I just pasted the sentence xD.
"You side of your bed, putting the large object between you and the closet door. Slowly back up until you reach the furthest wall. Your bedroom door was on the other side of the room, merely a few feet from your closet."