I found myself comparing the over-explaining to the Stanley Parable, but unlike in the Stanley Parable, first, the explanations added nothing new to the plot and second, I could not ignore the monologue to continue playing until it was finished. I agree with both commenters above that the game would be improved by either removing the monologues or allowing the player to ignore it without disrupting play. Maybe add a section to the journal where people can access thoughts on each note if they choose?