I really like this novel so far but the only thing I think should change is the characters age. Coach gil is way to young to have been the mc high school coach. Also to become a gym coach you need a bacheLors degree or a major in physical education. I feel like he should at least be in his 30s. Lars looks middle age and in the story it also made him seem like he is middle age. I was shocked when I found out he is 26 as well. Changing this I feel like will make the novel more realistic and also fit the characters.