tbh i agree with only one thing about this that you said, that the game needs more transparency. but. it is a erotic visual novel, most of these on itch.io go straight into the nsfw parts and barely show any actual things to the story. but if you ask the owner if they can create a different version of the game that has no nsfw and has a different timeline to it, where rather than the character going straight to sex its a bit different and has more transparency. if you need to know how to ask the owner something, just wait until they post a comment, right after that reply to it with the request, most likely they will answer you.