Hihi!! Nice to see you again! Hope you had a nice week!!
Typos I found for chapter 4:
- Page starts with "You squint at what you have done." When choosing why you want to paint your nails, there's a bunch of options that seem incomplete. "You like to stay up to date with the trends. You are decently popular despite your", "You have little desire to be". There's a period missing at the end of the "You don't want to stand out" option as well.
- Same page, passage starts with "The girls at school have pristine nails. " In the last line, it's your instead of you're.
- Page starts with "You enter the Black Swan." I think it's were instead of are in the "You sometimes wish there are windows in the Black Swan" but I'm not sure tbh. English is not my first language so I struggle a bit with grammar sometimes D:
OMG SANS' DATE GOT ME GIGGLING AND STUFF LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA. Wonderful chapter, as always! Also, good luck with making your game!! <3
- This one I will have to look into a bit more, as it works on my end so I'm wondering if it's a technical issue with exporting.
- you're --> your
- reworded the entire sentence to You sometimes wish Black Swan had windows
>:D Yes! All the giggles for the Sansy date! Thank you so much for your help again!!