I'm really excited to see more of this! The game feels so professional and well done, especially for something only made in a month. I love the custom textboxes for both characters, and the way John's portrait fades as you talk is a really nice touch. I'm also really fond of the art style in general. I look forward to watching this develop!
Edit: OMG you're the April Was A Fool artist????? That was one of the games that first got me into visual novels, it's delightful to see that you're still creating!