Hi i have some feedback for you !!! first off i am loving the C.G.I. and story but so far i am long it but i have noticed a few errors and a few wrong choises of word but not nothing major the only error i found so far is you don't get to name the M C right away for when he goes to the hospital for his check to woman could ask for his name, but i spotted a bug its when you meet the GAINT woman on the hill with the red and white flower she shows up as m.c. and rusa name too and seems to break the flow of the story, and if you don't mind me asking do you have someone that proof reading it or a closed beta tester that should be able to spot issues like this before the V.N. goes live to the public ??? and if not i would be willing and able to help you take this for a * OK * vn to an * A++ * story!!!