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Xadillian1 year ago (1 edit)

Thanks for letting me know, mate. Never used itch before, so learning as I go right now. I'll check the settings and see what I can do as soon as I can.

Edit: I removed the "[Run in browser]" option so it should just be a tiny little download.

acroddy1 year ago

I still don't see a download option or link listed on this page though.

I think there's supposed to be a separate option adding a download link or uploading the game file somewhere that people usually use.

Xadillian1 year ago (1 edit) (+2)

You're right again. XD Apologies. It keeps auto-ticking the box to make it run in browser, I assume because its an html file.

Regardless, I tweaked it and got scroll functionality working at the very least.

acroddy1 year ago (1 edit)

Good to see, looks like it's working now!

Overall, it's a very nice short bit of horror-themed writing, but I think the paragraphs could use a break or two between some sentences here and there.

Xadillian1 year ago

:) Awesome! I'll modify modify those to make it more readable. Thank you again for the feedback.

Are there any passages you would identify as particularly strong or weak?