Alright, so let's way up the pros and the cons.
The Pros
1) Great art
2) Alright music / sfx, even if the volumes were poorly balanced
The Cons
1) No gameplay depth - I'm fairly sure monsters can't even hurt me, so this just seems like a "lack of time" mistake. Without any gameplay depth, this feels like a walking sim.
2) Input was *extremely* buggy for me. I'm not sure if this happens for everyone, but if i press left, and then press up, i kind of glide in an arc, slowly upwards. This made the walking in the walking sim feel pretty bad.
3) Extremely short. But once again, I can see the whole lack of time thing being the cause here.
All in all, this could of been good with better programming / gameplay design. But, at least you've got your "artsy" parts down. Look forward to your next submission!