Looks very interesting!
Just tried both routes in the new update and I liked them! The Riker guy is actually exactly the type of guy that I would love to dominate lol, so I hope that would be an option for later.
There is a small bug in the sub route, if you reject to be Riker's toy:
Error: child tag <<next>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<timed>>
Other than this there are several grammar mistakes / typos here and there, but they are no big deal.
Thank you so much for pointing this out! I just published a fix for some of the typos. I couldn't find where you had the bug, though. Could you tell me what is the dialogue line or the text close to the error so I could look into it? On my end all paths seem working fine.
And for Riker, yes! I want players to be able to dominate all most all the characters and take control of the city. But you will have to be quite good! Riker is not going down without a fight 😄