Yeah, I certainly get that, I had a similar experience in one of the first game jams I entered :D I made a game for a game jam where the basic gameplay took me so long to figure out that I had to write all the dialogue and make all the cutscenes in just 2 hours so that I would be able to submit it at all. You actually streamed that one, I think. About a week before I finished the update that improved the gameplay and rewrote the dialogue, which I was actually a bit disappointed about :D
And to be fair, the dialogue in your game WAS good despite the time constraints, it was mostly just that unexplained plot twist at the end that made me decide to lower the rating. I also wanted to give you 3 stars for presentation, that one's more like 2.5 stars instead of 2. So, you can be sure that you did very well under the circumstances!
Thanks for participating in this game jam!