Hi there! Instead of simply clicking stars in the rating, I'd love to give some feedback about your work. We invest lots of hours in this projects, so just a thumbs up or down is a bit unfair.
- First of all, wow. The rituals are just... magical. Evocative texts that realy seems like traditional pagan rites. All this will serve me as inspiration in the future, for sure.
- Then, I think about enboding trully the IRL rites, ditching the 'pretending to be a witch at home'. In that way, I feel like the puns and jokes break the mistical atmosphere.
- Last, the project really needs some editing. All of it on a white sheet with the same font and format makes people not to value your fantastic piece. I know that editing is a horrific and spiky mess to get into, but with simple tricks you can make some serious work.
So, I don't want to rant and be very pesky on other's work. Those are my humble opinions. Make what you feel with them and keep the good work. <3 Thank you for making this wonderful project.