all I'm gonna say is that the grammar has a lot to be desired. It kinda feels like when I stayed up all night writing an essay only to look back at it and see everywhere I screwed up. I like the style but I'm really that the grammar gets fixed in the full game
It's actually like that 'stayed up all night and write' feels on this one for me (since it's made while / for the game jam!) Recently the game eng script/text has been proofread and updated Big thanks to https://timbojay.itch.io/ And it's likely we're going to team up again on the next story's writing to prevent me from writing with bad grammars again XD
Thank you for playing and please stay tune for our next story!