Aww this was so so cute! and that "once in a lifetime(s) ?" joke! XD
I really like how you've captured the idea of Maki journalling all this (and his hands getting a bit side tracked lol) through the use of an NVL style and background. The detail of there actually being a scribble on the page... too good! The exposition is also done really well where it seams like natural musing of the character! The character designs are also super cute!
Thanks for putting this out into the world, it was delightful to read/play through!