i love your writing, and especially the way you describe environments <3!!! the world building and characters are super compelling, can't wait to see what's next :D!!!
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I am glad that you like my world-building. I focus a lot on that and really try to immerse my readers into the setting. And I'm glad you like my characters, too! I was thinking I had to tone it down as most of them can be... hard on the MC, who is an extension of the player.
Also thank you for the screenshot. This is simply a formatting problem and I will get around to rectifying it.