I think you made a really interesting narrative-driven experience. Very heartfelt.
The house design felt very sterile, almost like it's a model home. While it's not the main focus, I feel like it could have more personality.
I'm a huge fan of the transition between story beats, especially near the end when they are confronting their fear.
Bonus points for making the UI clear and having the objectives obviously stated. Sure, there are some technical hiccups, but it didn't prevent me from finishing the game.
Awesome work, and I wish you luck!