Okay, so there are a few bugs. One that I am currently stuck in is when Dali asks what is your favourite insect. The passage repeats continuously even after making a choice. Visiting Ashtun and then taking a look at her book shows me a blank screen. This also comes up when I suggest Dali to visit Ashtun's place.
The writing overall is pretty good, and I enjoyed the characters and the more diverse choices. YThough I did see one error when during the Holt and Drey sex scene where Holt refers to me with the pronoun "him" even though I selected to be a female.