Ok, I played this for a couple hours, got to the point where you unlock the gallery, and yeah, I feel like every moment is very hit and miss, but it's got the the promise of a decently fun game.
Highly recommend finding someone willing to restructure your sentences though, because it often feels like it's very very translated.
I also recommend re-doing a lot of the faces that you see in the first hour or so of the game, because god some of them are GHASTLY!
Wish you well, and I'd love to see more of this.