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Love everything about the VN so far but had one minor pet peeve in my opinion, When Marruk calls the main character (who I've named Isaac) the doctor's new 'toy', that seemed particularly mean spirited and cruel.  I get that he's supposed to be suspicious and untrusting of Isaac at first, the VN does a great job at explaining and justifying why he needs to put the safety of the station and his own species before anything else.  I also get that he's being portrayed, in very effective and well-written manner, to be under an immense amount of stress and frustration, especially with him feeling like no one is taking his professional opinion into account.  Yet, him referring to Isaac as a 'toy' just seems uncharacteristically cruel and spiteful, and (please correct me if I'm wrong) he never really apologizes or even acknowledges it in the VN so far.  To be clear, I am not trying to nitpick or crap on this VN in any regard, I love it so far and have found everything from its art style to its setting, to its character development completely capturing and enjoyable.  I also don't want to dissuade any potential new readers from trying this VN, I would in fact encourage them experience what this VN has, as of now, to offer and to come to their own conclusion regarding what I previously mentioned.  Anyway, sorry for the wall of text, just wanted to voice a minor irk, one that is in no way going to keep me from supporting this project wholeheartedly and see how everyone else in this community felt.

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Compared what other abusive monsters like Cooper, Vulgor and many other did for repective protagonists (and people still simp for them by the way) Marruk calling MC a toy couple of times was such a non-issue to me I forgot it was even a thing by now.

Fair enough, but I just felt that it was a bit out of character of Marruk, and I hope there is at least some dialogue in the future VN acknowledging and even apologizing for it.  But again, love the VN and won't stop supporting it regardless of whether or not this is included.  

I do believe that Marruk is meant to be kind of the mean/bullyish character in the game. The way he treats the main character as well as Rhoun kinda shows it a bit. Its like anyone that isn't higher ranking than him is seen as trash.