This was genuinely really well done. While not perfect, a lot of the writing was interesting, and while I don't agree with how everything was done, it was clear that a large amount of time and effort was put into the script. The love for RWBY and Monty Oum was palpable by the end.
The visual direction on most non-character art was surprisingly well done. Most character art was...not good.
Why the hell did you get super racist and change people's skin color, though? That's not okay. You can't just 'decide' to make someone a different race.