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I finally got around to playing this (been a little,,, overwhelmed,,, these last few days alas) but i really like the sentiment of this!! You do a really good job setting up the MC's relationship with Anthony and conveying just what exactly fractured their dynamic in the first place (and also how things in life aren't perfect, especially in romance, and bonds between people can easily be fractured by things like society's expectations or one's own journey to better understand themselves in spite of maybe finding out they've still ended up going against those expectations).

The use of Renpy's speech bubbles was interesting but so fluid I didn't even really think about their inclusion until now (that is: i was so immersed i just realized in hindsight that you used them because they flowed so naturally into the game lol). 

I definitely felt like Anthony was very human in this. He's still finding himself, still trying to own up to mistakes he's made and people he's hurt. I find that really endearing in characters - the ability to recognize one's own faults and act on resolving 'em - and I think you nailed it perfectly. So good job!!! And thanks for making this game!!

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Thanks! I'm glad the relationship between the MC and Anthony showed! I really wanted to tackle this melancholic feeling, this kind of nostalgia that could exist between two ex-lovers who don't each other but can't say they ended up on a good note. And Anthony has still a long way to self-discovery and to own up to his own actions, and I'm glad you saw that in him and let him the chance to actually do so.

And I'm happy for the bubbles! It was a bit of a fight, but I'm a bit dumb sometimes so I won't blame them too much but I'm happy to have this tool! And I thought it suited this game quite well indeed... Somehow, it makes everything feel more immersive? (And frankly, imagine the game being titled "Out of the suitcase" without being able to see the suitcase... waste, that's what it is!)

Thank you for your gentle feedback, it means the world!!!