Another lovely update! I laughed so hard at some of the scenes, especially the interrogation and the cooking. And everyone is so sweet... it was nice to see a bit more into their pasts and their personal stakes.
Here's another round of typos I came across:
- Sanjiro: It's primary use => Its
- Sanjiro: I'd like tell you => to tell you
- MC: sent me an El => and
- MC: So what can I do to help. => question mark
- Kaylee: Who know's => knows
- Hanna: What makes you say that. => question mark
- Ashe: Maybe because it felt safe in your arms => (missing period)
- Sanjiro: will be lead by you => led
- MC: pretty straight
-forward => straightforward - MC: I'm enjoying regardless => enjoying it
- Emily: all it takes it one lucky shot => is
- Sanjiro: a
abunch => superfluous a
Hope that helps!