Great game demo with a good art style and a good music!! I like it!! Good job!!
For me when I played more than 30 minutes then I found lost because I didn’t know what to do, because I was only recollecting ink, books, answering questions and feathers but without any proposal. For make the player want to recollect these objects I will add utility to that objects than you recollect so it have some sense to pick all of them Also than the game guide you a bit more so you know where you have to go will be great too, because you can’t know where to go
For the rest the game is looking great!! I hope you good luck working on it :D