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!SPOILER!

If you look at the story plot description on the page it's clear that the MC is not well. The prologue is mostly focused on the events surrounding the MC and only very superficially touches on the MC's inner thoughts and emotions, but I try to go into what reason(s) he might have for not sending Mikiko away (she is a typical Tsundere character who is slowly becoming more relatable to the MC), which is clearly stated at the end of the prologue. And why the MC goes along with all this will be revealed more clearly in the next update. My aim with the prologue is to set the scene for the story to get going.

As for the English language bugs, English is not my first language but they will be fixed by the time the android version is released on Sunday.

Thanks for your feedback on the game I really appreciate it.

Chestercat1 year ago(+1)

I think you may want to give a few reasons to why the MC bears with it from the start. I mean right now the best i can think of is that he is really stoic in nature and thinks she may have answers, maybe emphasis on the latter a bit more. I mean the dude is an orphan, so maybe he enjoys having some presence around him too, even as obnoxious as this girl can be.

I may be wrong, but i thought tsundere acted in a distant or violent way only toward their love interrest, not toward random strangers. To me Mikiko is more a violent bitch trying to avenge her parents death more than a shy girl hiding her feeling under a layer of icy behavior or agressivity. I did get hints about you going this way though, all the more with the end of the current version. Not that there is anything wrong with a PTSD riddled girl.

English is fine, for the most part.

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